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PostSubject: Yun Che - Way of the Black Sky   Mon Apr 17, 2017 2:07 pm

BYOND Key: YunChe
Character Name: Yun Che
Character Age: 18
Rank: C
Creation Points: 4
(IC) Purpose for Jutsu: Basically Yun Che needs a fighting style that matches his personality and fighting style, which revolves around being berserk and killing intent.
Jutsu Name: Way of the Black Sky
Intended Rank: B
Jutsu Description: A ancient Chakra circulation technique and a fighting style that is completely reliant on negative emotions. This fighting style is animalistic and has no form, focusing solely on destruction and power.
Gameplay Description: 6(+3/-3) for every 10 strength above the target's endurance. While this style is activate the user is capable of blocking weapons, and any unarmed strike is treated as a weapon dealing 3 extra damage that ignores endurance.

Black Origin Threshold -- Is activated once this character enters Berserk. This causes the natural flow of Chakra to be reversed and signifies the moment when one surpasses the limits of the consciousness and the subconsciousness, the enemy & the self, and achieves the purest fighting spirit. This character get out berserk state once his designated target(s) are brough down, and he will attack anyone that try to stop him from attacking his target(s).
Killer Instinct is increased to -6 in all physical stats to all enemies with lower vitality than the user.
Perks Requeriment: Berserker, Killer Instinct, Path of Rakshasa. (Thought that this would be important)


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PostSubject: Re: Yun Che - Way of the Black Sky   Sat Apr 22, 2017 6:26 pm

beserker and killer instinct are -NOT- doubled, why don't just say strikes deal 3 damage that ignore endurance or something?
Unarmed strikes count as weapon damage? okay.
Black origin threshold sounds op but its lame, and its ic effect is too op...
Killing intent increases to -6, if the user's vitality is higher than their opponents.
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PostSubject: Re: Yun Che - Way of the Black Sky   Sat Apr 22, 2017 11:51 pm

Wuts OP on Black Origin? And yeah, it sounds relly OP, but I didn't make what I thought cuzz I was mostly sure that it would not be approved... At least not as a B.
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PostSubject: Re: Yun Che - Way of the Black Sky   Sun Apr 23, 2017 12:12 am

Take out the third line about completely ignoring pain and injuries. and ill approve.

Also while this is active, you can block weapon attacks.
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PostSubject: Re: Yun Che - Way of the Black Sky   Sun Apr 23, 2017 12:21 am

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